Write a short tribute to Dame Mary Gilmore drawing on any one of her poems (in the Pen Anthology 256-259) to show how important her ideas are to Australians.
Dame Mary Gilmore had an eloquent way with words. She was able to convey extremely important societal issues of her time in an alluring, concise way and to me this is one of the most impressive aspects of Dame Mary Gilmore’s writing that laments her importance to Australians. This is highlighted throughout her poem ‘Eves Song’ as she was able to resonate ideologies of the poor treatment of women during the 19th century in Australia through her own whimsical way of writing, allowing the poem to still retain meaning to women of today’s society. Dame Mary Gilmore particularly places focus upon the way in which women during this time were subservient to their male-counterpart and were bound to societal expectations of marriage. This can be identified through the repetitive phrase in the poem “I span and eve span”; a biblical allusion which I have interpreted as alluding to the idea that Eve was made purely for Adam’s benefit. Therefore it is necessary and societally expected for women to tend to man. As powerful as the meaning is behind this wonderfully worded statement, it is the way in which Gilmore continues to utilise it throughout her poem in which resonates with me most. The repetition almost reinforces the idea that women always find their way back to this restrictive way of thinking that they are bound to man. It is as if you can see Gilmore’s persistent nature through this very quote; she is passionate and she wants to make it clear to women that they are independent and “that more than man was love and prize”, exemplifying her importance to Australians as this message is still one in which is acknowledged today.
Although we are to commend Dame Mary Gilmore on her writing abilities, her sheer bravery cannot go unsaid. The time in which she wrote did not give women the liberty and free-will to speak their mind, however, Dame Mary Gilmore did exactly that. She is to be acknowledged for this and the message that she so beautifully and strongly articulated through her poem in which is still be appreciated by Australian women today; cementing the importance of Dame Mary Gilmore’s ideologies to Australians.
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This is an excellent blog on Gilmore Teneille! Well done! You write well with passion, but your final draft needs much more careful editing!
MG
Editing Needed (and some workshop follow-ups- see Purdue Owl for help: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/section/1/
* Dame Mary Gilmores writing =Dame Mary Gilmore’s writing [ ‘s or s’ – Apostrophe- if there is a meaning of ownership ( the boy’s apple/ the boys’ apples) then you need an apostrophe. See http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/621/01/. But don’t use apostrophe s for normal plurals!!! ]
*to women of today’s modern-day society.= to women of today’s society.-[try to be more concise!]
*a biblical allusion in which I have interpreted as = a biblical allusion which I have interpreted as
*for Adams benefit,= for Adam’s benefit,
*Adams benefit, therefore it is necessary and societally expected for women to tend to man. = Adams benefit. Therefore it is necessary and societally expected for women to tend to man. -[new sentence needed here.]
*Gilmores persistent nature= Gilmore’s persistent nature
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Another problem:
Dame Mary Gilmore’s writing that laments her importance to Australians. – laments is not the right word here.
Dame Mary Gilmore’s writing that….. what exactly are you trying to say. 🙂
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