Australian Literature Peer Review 3

Blog by: Lauren Perry. https://australianliteratureblogbylaurenperry.home.blog/2019/09/15/blog-4/

Hi Lauren, I really like how positive you have made this blog! This letter appears very easy to read and well punctuated, it felt like reading a real letter that had been sent to Meg as it flows. I have to agree with your stance, that being that Meg should go for whatever/whoever it may be that makes her happy. I also really like how you incorporated Aunt Daise into the letter I though that was very sweet. This blog led me to think about what it may be that Patrick White might think of your letter. I think he would love that you have encapsulated that sense of ‘mystery’ and ‘poetry’ that is stemmed from Megs and Lummy’s relationship. I think perhaps if you had made this letter a little longer and had some more in depth detail perhaps about Meg, Lummy or Myrtle, it would of strengthened your blog. Otherwise, I really like this entry. Keep up the good work!