America Writing Peer Review 3

Blog by: Nancy David. https://nancysliteratureblog.home.blog/2019/09/15/blog-3-a-letter-to-james-baldwin/

Hi Nancy! I really enjoyed this blog entry. To me, this seemed like a true professional and well written letter. I really enjoyed how you incorporated more than one of Baldwins texts to support the way in which he widely demonstrates the severity of racism and discrimination. I can see through this letter how much his works have impacted your understanding of these issues and the power of Baldwins writings; I also feel the same way! I particularly like how you wrote “There is power, conviction and logic in your writing, which portrays a sense of realism, suffering and describes the discriminations experienced by the African American communities”. This blog truly encapsulates the sense of logic and realism through your choice of wording in which is also seen in baldwins works. I think perhaps by incorporating some textual evidence from the writings you have referenced could strengthen you blog even more so! Other than that, I really enjoyed this, keep up the good work!