Peer Review 3

Teannie’s Blog: https://teannie.home.blog/2020/10/14/write-a-paragraph-that-continues-this-sentence-by-james-joyce-and-express-your-own-hopes-for-your-life/comment-page-1/?unapproved=52&moderation-hash=75f2b9efe7c4091d3a5bac52c82b1d27#comment-52

Hi Teannie,
I love this blog post! I think it would have to be one of the most inspirational blogs i have read whilst reviewing. I love how you are true to yourself and your emotions in this blog, I think it allows all readers to gain a true sense of who you are. I really resonate with your future endeavours for your students as I feel the exact same way. I think if you pass this sense of wisdom onto your students, you will make an incredible teacher! I love how you also capture that little bit of James Joyce in there too. You managed to bring your blog back to the class work while also writing from your perspective and I find that kind of hard to achieve! So you have done a great job in doing that. I think to strengthen this blog maybe you could read it out loud to yourself to make sure all the sentences flow. As well as this, as you make reference to Joyce, maybe you could have added a little but more of that intrinsic voice that you had been using through the rest of your blog. otherwise I honestly think this is an awesome blog and you are going to make an awesome teacher in the future!