Peer Review 4

Evelyn’s Blog: https://literaturetalk.home.blog/2020/09/24/beauty-is-destructive/comment-page-1/?unapproved=49&moderation-hash=1289ae4c60fbf1e1e509c3eac50a8d14#comment-49

Hi Evelyn,
Wow, this is a very powerful piece. I completely resonate with your understanding of our modern world. We are becoming a world that is blind and it is truly sad. I love how you were true to yourself and your emotions, I think Yeats himself would respect this honesty. An eye opening statement for me was: “Many beautiful females self-destruct as they try to figure out ways to use their beauty”. ‘Beauty’ has always been and remains a driving force in society which I agree needs to change. I love that your piece is straightforward and blunt, it really allows you to delve right into the eye opening facts. I think to strengthen this post perhaps you could engage with quotes from Yeats poem a little more and potentially make the blog a little longer. Other than that, you have done a great job and I will certainly be thinking about this more from now on.